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Post by Guest Fri Oct 18, 2013 12:00 pm

Name:
Christian Callista

Age:
32

Gender:
Male

Appearance:
Portrait

Chris is a fair skinned, adult man with short raven black hair and a tattoo on his neck, which runs down to his chest and covers half of his right arm. No one has ever seen his eyes, so its impossible to determine his eye color- but if you have to know, they`re grey. His body is muscular and much so, in a side by side comparison he would only just lose to Wrestler... okay, thats a lie, he would definitely lose, but he is very well trained. He`s 184 cm´s tall and weighs 117 kilograms.

Chris wears a standard Hellsing uniform, in a green colorscheme. Above that is a bulletproof vest with silicium armor segments for a flexible, yet very hard to penetrate kind of body armor. It can be taken off with ease due to metal clips, and has some convinently placed pockets to carry spare magazines with. On his thighs is a tactical harness with additional magazines and the holsters for his two guns, as well as a sheath for his combat blade. He wears high combat boots with steel tips.
And just for style, he wears shooting gloves and a pair of black sunglasses- which he keeps on even at night.

Vest

Harness

Boots

Equipment:
Chris`s favorite weapon of war is a pair of highly customized Mark XIX Desert Eagles built by Magnum Research. They both got Novak night sights, as they`re mainly used in the dark of the night, and both have custom polygonal barrels. They´re both chambered in .50 Action Express, the most powerful cartridge developed for this gun, and they both have the newly introduced picatinny slide barrels and powerful blast compensators. One is in a nickel plated silver finish while the other is in a matte black style, the silver one has pearl grips, while the black one has rosewood grips, they both have brass levers, hammers and triggers. On the slide of each pistol is a name engraved in a language he can´t read, but looks really cool. Each of his bullets has his signature engraved on the side- something he uses a CNC machine for since he really doesn´t have that much time.

Basic gun 1

Basic gun 2

Night sights

Controls both guns

Polygonal rifled barrel

Grips gun 1 (couldnt find a pic with a Desert Eagle so this will have to do)

Grips gun 2

For ammunition, he uses hotloaded FMJ rounds with silver cores and copper jackets, as well as a lead tip. The ammo is so overloaded that the flash coming from the muzzle is bright white, and the muzzle flame is nearly one and a half meters long. Aside from four regular magazines with custom floorplates and 7 round capacity for each pistol, he also has two custom 25 round drum magazines for these weapons.
That makes ten magazines in total, four on each side of him, two on the back.

Floorplates

Ammo

Drum magazine

Jay Fisher custom Tanto

Knife stabby thingamabob.

Chris`s preferred blade is a custom made Tanto with a pearl grip and a silver laced steel blade thats been blessed and purified.

Race:
Human

Abilities:
Chris is a masterful two handed shooter- having total control over his arms and hands, he can rapid fire his Desert Eagles with no problems whatsoever, except a certain pain on his wrists that comes from doing that. However, thanks to the compensators, it won´t break anything.
Aiming with the front sight rather than with the whole sight, he can aim much faster and just as precise as any IPSC shooter. In fact, he claims to be just as good as a vampire- though his eyes don´t go far enough to keep up with one.

Otherwise, hes a very fit, agile and talented man- quick to respond, taught in the basics of most common hand to hand and knife fighting techniques, he`s athletic and can jump over obstacles, climb ropes, vault over a parking car or swim a mile with no problems. Though the later rarely comes in handy.

Organization:
Hellsing

Personality:
Most persons discribe Chris as an arrogant poser and a prick, who makes fun of people to amuse himself and only himself. But in fact, once you hang out with him for a while, he´s not that bad of a person to be with- a very pro-social and cheerful kind of guy, Chris can take just about any kind of conversation topic and keep it going, the question is, would you want to.
In battle, he`s just as he always is- a cocky, flamboyant kind of guy, popping jokes here and there, while firing whenever he´s got the chance to. Since he´s even more skilled than Mato, he likes to show off his skill a lot, but doesn´t steal kills from his teammates.
Secretly, he´s a bit of a sadist and likes to cause pain to his enemies, though not as much as that he`d let them bleed out or anything, he just likes to terminate their lives.

Rank:
Master Sargeant

Biography:
Chris grew up in NY, USA, in a middle class family with both parents and two sisters. As such, things weren`t always easy, but they managed somehow- mainly by keeping together, keeping it real. They didn´t fly to India during the summer vacation or go to Disneyland, instead they spent the night in Central Park or visited the honey factory. He recieved some decent education, but they never had the money to get him all the way through college.. as such he struggled for jobs for a while until he got enlisted in the Army, where he served for ten years.
After an accident involving a hammer, a 120mm tank shell and a bottle of whiskey, Chris was thrown out and landed on the streets again- with someone like his sort of skill and service record, that meant he had no choice but to either become a mercenary or a firearms instructor... and the later would have never worked due to that accident.

Blackwater came like a blessing to him, even though he didn´t get to spend a lot of time in their ranks before they arrived in England, hired by a shady organization called Hellsing- roughly a year, then he was engulfed in a world of vampires, Nazis seeking the destruction of civilization, the catholic church seeking the end of their employer, and their employer being a pushy dictatorous woman... whom he quickly gotten to trust and like, thanks to her wise decisons and open minded leadership.
During this time, he met the young apprentice of the Hellsings, Mato Kuroi, and taught her a lot about combat, tactics, and especially about dual wielding handguns... as such, they´re close friends, and she sees him as sort of a mentor.
Eventually, Chris dropped out of Blackwater again to become a permanent member of the Hellsing Organization.

Sample:
http://hellsingrpg.darkbb.com/t2876-chris-maia-and-ben-go-to-do-stuff

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Post by John Smith Fri Oct 18, 2013 4:46 pm

Mato Kuroi (Temporal) wrote:Name:
Christian Callista

Age:
32

Gender:
Male
That's some stuff.

Need some stuff? wrote:Appearance:
Portrait

Chris is a fair skinned, adult man with short raven black hair and a tattoo on his neck, which runs down to his chest and covers half of his right arm. No one has ever seen his eyes, so its impossible to determine his eye color- but if you have to know, they`re grey. His body is muscular and much so, in a side by side comparison he would only just lose to Wrestler... okay, thats a lie, he would definitely lose, but he is very well trained. He`s 184 cm´s tall and weighs 117 kilograms.

Chris wears a standard Hellsing uniform, in a green colorscheme. Above that is a bulletproof vest with silicium armor segments for a flexible, yet very hard to penetrate kind of body armor. It can be taken off with ease due to metal clips, and has some convinently placed pockets to carry spare magazines with. On his thighs is a tactical harness with additional magazines and the holsters for his two guns, as well as a sheath for his combat blade. He wears high combat boots with steel tips.
And just for style, he wears shooting gloves and a pair of black sunglasses- which he keeps on even at night.

Vest

Harness

Boots
He has no real face.

What is this tattoo? A straight line? A snake? A Van Gogh portrait?

Need more detail than "standard uniform".

You got the stuff? wrote:Equipment:
Chris`s favorite weapon of war is a pair of highly customized Mark XIX Desert Eagles built by Magnum Research. They both got Novak night sights, as they`re mainly used in the dark of the night, and both have custom polygonal barrels. They´re both chambered in .50 Action Express, the most powerful cartridge developed for this gun, and they both have the newly introduced picatinny slide barrels and powerful blast compensators. One is in a nickel plated silver finish while the other is in a matte black style, the silver one has pearl grips, while the black one has rosewood grips, they both have brass levers, hammers and triggers. On the slide of each pistol is a name engraved in a language he can´t read, but looks really cool. Each of his bullets has his signature engraved on the side- something he uses a CNC machine for since he really doesn´t have that much time.

Basic gun 1

Basic gun 2

Night sights

Controls both guns

Polygonal rifled barrel

Grips gun 1 (couldnt find a pic with a Desert Eagle so this will have to do)

Grips gun 2
While I want someone else to check this out, I can tell that firing two of those things at the same time is pretty improbable. Not to mention you're just doing the Jackal thing, so I don't like them to start with.

Not enough stuff wrote:For ammunition, he uses hotloaded FMJ rounds with silver cores and copper jackets, as well as a lead tip. The ammo is so overloaded that the flash coming from the muzzle is bright white, and the muzzle flame is nearly one and a half meters long. Aside from four regular magazines with custom floorplates and 7 round capacity for each pistol, he also has two custom 25 round drum magazines for these weapons.
That makes ten magazines in total, four on each side of him, two on the back.

Floorplates

Ammo

Drum magazine

Jay Fisher custom Tanto

Knife stabby thingamabob.

Chris`s preferred blade is a custom made Tanto with a pearl grip and a silver laced steel blade thats been blessed and purified.
That's a lot of ammunition. I'd say drop the boxes or drop two regular magazines. Also, I don't like how you're making them more and more powerful as you go, especially since you're a regular human trying to shoot these two at the same time.

You give us no specifics on this knife.

Need more stuff again wrote:Race:
Human

Abilities:
Chris is a masterful two handed shooter- having total control over his arms and hands, he can rapid fire his Desert Eagles with no problems whatsoever, except a certain pain on his wrists that comes from doing that. However, thanks to the compensators, it won´t break anything.
Aiming with the front sight rather than with the whole sight, he can aim much faster and just as precise as any IPSC shooter. In fact, he claims to be just as good as a vampire- though his eyes don´t go far enough to keep up with one.

Otherwise, hes a very fit, agile and talented man- quick to respond, taught in the basics of most common hand to hand and knife fighting techniques, he`s athletic and can jump over obstacles, climb ropes, vault over a parking car or swim a mile with no problems. Though the later rarely comes in handy.
I'm not buying it. He's a regular human; he can't rapid fire Desert Eagles.

You should probably add some other stuff he can do besides fighting.

NYEH wrote:Organization:
Hellsing

Personality:
Most persons discribe Chris as an arrogant poser and a prick, who makes fun of people to amuse himself and only himself. But in fact, once you hang out with him for a while, he´s not that bad of a person to be with- a very pro-social and cheerful kind of guy, Chris can take just about any kind of conversation topic and keep it going, the question is, would you want to.
In battle, he`s just as he always is- a cocky, flamboyant kind of guy, popping jokes here and there, while firing whenever he´s got the chance to. Since he´s even more skilled than Mato, he likes to show off his skill a lot, but doesn´t steal kills from his teammates.
Secretly, he´s a bit of a sadist and likes to cause pain to his enemies, though not as much as that he`d let them bleed out or anything, he just likes to terminate their lives.

Rank:
Master Sargeant
Seems pretty sparse. I feel like you could add more into this. Mato doesn't exist here, either, so I have to pretend I don't know what that means.

I don't think that rank exists in the British army.

Stuff... wrote:Biography:
Chris grew up in NY, USA, in a middle class family with both parents and two sisters. As such, things weren`t always easy, but they managed somehow- mainly by keeping together, keeping it real. They didn´t fly to India during the summer vacation or go to Disneyland, instead they spent the night in Central Park or visited the honey factory. He recieved some decent education, but they never had the money to get him all the way through college.. as such he struggled for jobs for a while until he got enlisted in the Army, where he served for ten years.
After an accident involving a hammer, a 120mm tank shell and a bottle of whiskey, Chris was thrown out and landed on the streets again- with someone like his sort of skill and service record, that meant he had no choice but to either become a mercenary or a firearms instructor... and the later would have never worked due to that accident.

Blackwater came like a blessing to him, even though he didn´t get to spend a lot of time in their ranks before they arrived in England, hired by a shady organization called Hellsing- roughly a year, then he was engulfed in a world of vampires, Nazis seeking the destruction of civilization, the catholic church seeking the end of their employer, and their employer being a pushy dictatorous woman... whom he quickly gotten to trust and like, thanks to her wise decisons and open minded leadership.
During this time, he met the young apprentice of the Hellsings, Mato Kuroi, and taught her a lot about combat, tactics, and especially about dual wielding handguns... as such, they´re close friends, and she sees him as sort of a mentor.
Eventually, Chris dropped out of Blackwater again to become a permanent member of the Hellsing Organization.

Sample:
http://hellsingrpg.darkbb.com/t2876-chris-maia-and-ben-go-to-do-stuff
You brush past this accident, but I want to know what it was. What happened that prevents him from being a gun instructor?

How did he find out about this mercenary group, and why did they let him join? What makes this a valid employment opportunity when an instructor isn't?

Hellsing is currently using their original forces from the British Armed Forces. They have not hired anyone to fill their need for men, especially not a group you made up.

Mato doesn't exist here, like I said before, so we don't know who that is or why it's important.

The biography, as a whole, is very rushed and gives us very little to work with.

Sample has to be from your character, too, and not from another site.
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