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Post by John Smith Wed Oct 16, 2013 10:29 pm

Notes: I've chosen to spend my senior Souls on upgrading her to Advanced right from the start. I've taken advantage of the freedom cyborgs have in creating their power setup to increase her Strength and Stamina to Level 2 while dropping her Speed and Durability to Level 1. If this is an issue or needs discussion, I can work with that.


Appearance


Yuu is a small girl, barely over five feet in height. Her tan skin is contrasted by her short white hair and pale, expressionless eyes. Though her features are normally covered with her coat, she has a small face with a button nose and thin lips without any distinguishing marks other than her slightly puffy cheeks. Due to the operations, the end of her vertebrae are extended, sticking out of the base of her back, colored black and mechanical. At her elbows, in place of normal appendages, she has her massive black metal “Ogre Arms”.

Her clothing was chosen by her handlers at the J.N.V.D.O. to be both functional for her job and to show citizens she is to be their protector (obviously adhering to the Japanese stereotypes for such things). She wears a short, sleeveless black dress with a large collar and hood, a white zipper in front. The collar obscures the lower portion of her face while the hood hides most of the upper part of her head. Around the collar is a decorative white flame design. A small fist symbol (representing the J.N.V.D.O.) is on the left side of her chest to show her allegiance. On her legs are black stockings, rising to about mid-thigh and ending with white bows on the outsides, with black, metal lift shoes to give her a small amount of height and stabilize her legs and feet when jumping and landing long distances.


Equipment


As STRENGTH, Yuu needs no other weapon besides her body. Her mechanical “Ogre Arms” are large, titanium alloy hands installed with highly advanced computer engineering used for smashing and punching. Her reinforced skeleton gives her the strength to beat through buildings without an exorbitant amount of stress on her organic parts. In addition, her arms have been designed to transform themselves as needed, usually into a pair of large machine guns. Firing specialized armor piercing versions of 7.62mm armor piercing bullets tipped with a special silver and steel alloy, they are powerful enough to blow holes in concrete walls with ease. Seven magazines inside each arm are swapped in and out with a series of complex parts, each holding forty-five bullets. Spent shells from one magazine are ejected, followed by the magazine itself, continuing until she is out of ammunition. Each hand only has four fingers.

Also a weapon is the end of her spinal cord, always emergent from her back. Naturally pointed at the end, the metal enhancements have made it razor sharp. It is flexible and able to extend several meters, enough to attack targets directly in front of her should her hands become occupied. The weakness to it, however, is that the stretching required to extend her spine leaves large gaps in her vertebrae, much easier to break apart than they would be normally. This is why she prefers not to use this means of attack unless it is necessary for a quick victory.

She has no pockets and is unable to carry any other equipment.


Personality


Yuu was taken in by the government at a young age, and as such remembers very little of her previous life. This saddens her greatly, though she does recall both her parents loved her, as well as some of the story books and toys she used to have. Despite a relatively good relationship with her mechanic and a few of the doctors (the only people she could potentially call friends in the world), she has closed herself to people in general out of fear. She is rarely happy, and rarely allows herself to feel much of anything in general. Her mechanic is the only one she has ever felt comfortable opening up to, a young man in his early thirties, as she is able to trust him enough to keep her alive and working well. Never learning much in the ways of “common sense”, she can be naïve and foolish at times, though is far from stupid.

She does not know how to deal well with others. If someone were to yell at her, she would most likely begin to shut down and stop listening, or burst into tears and cover her head. This only applies to social situations, though, since she generally tries to tune out distractions while in battle and focus singularly on completing the mission without thinking.

She despises her name STRENGTH and takes it as her being nothing but a weapon to be tossed into the field on a whim (which many of her handlers see her as), and would prefer people not to use it in casual conversation. Even so, she forces herself to use this introduction in formal settings, as her identity is meant as a secret. Despite this, those “close” to her abide by her wishes and use her real name when not around any of the superior officers.

Despite her official rank, Yuu has no real authority when it comes to dictating her life. Her daily schedule is set for her by the doctors and military personnel and her free time is always monitored. This lack of freedom gives her a feeling of even greater confinement. Though she would initially enjoy things such as reading and (attempting) to play with toys, she quickly lost interest after everything she was doing became printed on a clipboard. Now, all she really does is sit in her room until it is time for the next mission or maintenance.


Abilities


Regenerative Potential: Level 0 (None)
Physical Abilities: Level 2 (Medium enhanced strength, and stamina) Weapons may be incorporated into the body. Level 0 Speed (slower than peak human, decent ability to move along with bounding movements from arms).
Durability: Level 1 (Minor resistance to blunt weapons)

Yuu is an expert combatant, thanks to her enhancements. Not trained in any form of martial art or weapon (as it would be completely unable to be adapted to her body), she fights purely on instinct, with the exception of orders issued from her handlers. Aside from the large amount of strength (as before, able to smash through buildings due to their large size), she can also use the Ogre Arms to propel herself large distances in a sort of hop. She can either land on the Arms or her legs, as her boots and bones are both reinforced to prevent her from snapping her ankles upon impact with the ground.

Referenced previously, her entire skeletal system is reinforced with the same alloy used in the making of her Ogre Arms. Her arms, however, were completely removed from the elbow down and replaced, making the Ogre Arms a part of her. They have very limited sensory input, enough to tell her when she is in contact with something, but cannot feel any specific sensation, such as pain, heat, cold, etc. The large amount of metal inside of her makes her incredibly sturdy and heavy, keeping her from being easily knocked down, but also making her easy to sink, since she is too heavy to be able to swim (she is not affected by most magnets, though).

Her cybernetic augmentation also gifted her with enhanced stamina, enough to exert herself fully for hours on end without fatigue, as well as largely enhanced strength in areas other than her arms, enough to kick a large man a few meters. She is also decently swift, using her arms to quickly traverse an area, as well as swinging from them to quickly dodge and evade, aided by her training in gymnastics (which took quite a long time to master, due to her bulkiness). She also has built in radio, allowing her to communicate and receive information from others on the same frequency.

During her training period, she was taught a large amount of general knowledge, such as math, science, and literature. She can fluently speak Japanese, English, French, and Spanish, and can understand International Sign language (though would obviously have problems if she attempted to actually communicate with it). Aside from that, she is largely ignorant of the world, unable to venture out freely due to her body. Her main experience with the outside is on missions, though she has pretended that the indoor greenhouse is a jungle from a story her mother read her as a child. She has no ability to take care of herself outside of basic human needs. A personal mechanic is required to tune her body when it is damaged, as well as to replace her bones should she grow larger. In addition to this, she still requires food and water like a normal human.


Biography


Yuu had a fairly normal childhood until the age of six. Both her parents loved her dearly and wanted to give her the best life she could have. Unfortunately, in the typical depressing backstory style, a freak car accident nearly killed her. Rushed to the hospital, her parents were told that, while they could save her life, Yuu would be completely paralyzed. About to give up hope, a shady man in a suit informed them that there was a way to save their child’s life, but it would be at the cost of never being able to see her again. While the situation may seem out of place to most, this was Japan, so most had come to terms with the idea of a shadow organization needing small children for their experiments. Without any amount of sarcasm, it was the government's intention to have children in their program; they followed orders much better than adults, and ones that had already been broken physically would be easier to break mentally. The man was one of the agents, having been watching the hospital for several days now to try and find a suitable candidate for testing.

The hardest decision they would ever be forced to make, her parents reluctantly agreed to the man’s offer, thinking it would be better for her never to see them again than to live her whole life in a hospital bed. Shipped off to a government lab, numerous hours of painful surgery gifted Yuu with an enhanced skeleton, returning her the use of her body and increasing her physical abilities. Her arms, mangled in the crash, were replaced by a prototype weapon dubbed the “Imp Arms”. Initially overjoyed at being okay, she was quickly stunned and saddened at the fact she would never see her parents again, as well as being totally unable to perform ordinary tasks, even to hold a pencil, due to lack of coordination. It would take her three years to fully master these new appendages (numerous bones replacements to compensate for her growth not helping the fact), all the while being trained into one of Japan’s greatest weapon.

As vampires attack countries outside of the west, it was necessary for Japan to create such a task force to defend the country from supernatural threats. Created in 1979, they have served the country similar to True Cross in Europe and V.W.A.T. in America. It was this group training Yuu as their “secret weapon”, of sorts. As years went by, the girl became more and more withdrawn, becoming increasingly uncomfortable with the way her body was becoming, especially after the perfection of her weaponry, now known as the “Ogre Arms”, making her completely unable to appear like a normal girl, coupled with the strange transformation of her artificial spine into a weapon. All the while, she missed her family, the memories of her time with them growing more and more muddied each day.

Her first mission came in 2009, tasked with a simple extermination. Though three agents were sent as backup, she killed the target on her own without effort. Initially frightened by her power and the prospect of killing, she grew numb to it eventually and no longer has any feeling towards it. Accepting her place as a weapon, she no longer hopes to reunite with her parents, nor of being anything more than a tool for killing. As a show of good faith, she was transferred to V.W.A.T. in America, both to solidify to bond between the two groups (and, by extension, countries), but also to give them a chance to test new subjects without Yuu’s knowledge.



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Post by Henry Travers Sat Oct 19, 2013 2:03 am

Couple things.

1) Based on the Race Stats, Advanced Cyborgs already have Level 1 speed so you're not really dropping it down any to balance out the increased strength. That being said, dropping down the durability is a wonderful step in balancing higher than average starting strength.

2) The bio puzzles me a bit. This dude just happens to be at the hospital when this critically injured girl needs him the most and the parents take this stranger at his word? Why abduct little girls for this experiment? Why that hospital? All in all the bio just feels very rushed. I'd like you to draw it out a bit more and really hammer out what went down and why.
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Post by John Smith Sat Oct 19, 2013 11:22 am

Forgot about that first part. I'll make the necessary adjustments.

It's a little tongue-in-cheek. You know how I am with that. It's Japan, so OF COURSE the government is recruiting mortally wounded little girls into their experimental cyborg program. I will take another look in there, though, and see what I could expound upon.
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Post by Henry Travers Mon Oct 21, 2013 1:31 pm

I can buy the idea of children being better weapons. Plenty of cultures have experimented with child soldiers in some way. However, I'm still not fond of calling it a coincidence (even ironically). If you're going with the government program idea, I suggest just flat out saying that this particular shady guy was always working this hospital for recruits. I know that it's being implied already, but if something happens in the future and somebody who hasn't spoken with you about it looks at the sheet there could be some confusion. Confusion isn't fun.
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Post by Eleanor Harkness Fri Nov 01, 2013 12:41 pm

I have so many problems with a character being this powerful right off the bat, particularly when we are all supposed to be starting at such low levels.

Regardless, you made the edits.

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Post by Henry Travers Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:13 am

If you have problems with the character sheet as it is, approving it anyway defeats the purpose of having multiple perspectives on the Staff. Let's try and set up some kind of conversation on this so we can all get on the same page.
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Post by Father Anthony Diem Sat Nov 23, 2013 11:27 pm

I'm alright with this, Im normally a fan of John's sheets, they do tend to be pretty powerful; but I like them partly because of that, after all uniqueness in a character can often times mean they are very powerful in some regard. Abnormally so, which is why they are unique. I feel he has done enough explaining, and good enough explaining in order to be given an approval by my hand.

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